29.11.11
4.10.11
POETIC WRITING:
Spring Couplet:
Have you ever seen a lamb?
Cute woolly, lovely soft, really funny.
Awesome!
Kayla
31.8.11
6.7.11
We are learning to use descriptive language in our writing:
WINTER SENSES POEM
Winter feels like hot chocolate with marshmallows running down my throat.
Winter looks like people building snowmen.
Winter sounds like rustling wind wriggling in the branches.
Winter tastes like hot burgers that mum has made.
Winter smells like mum’s hot soup cooking in the oven.
By Nathanael
We are learning to use descriptive language in our writing:
WINTER SENSES POEM
Winter feels like warm blankets on a cold night.
Winter looks like a glowing fire burning in the fireplace.
Winter sounds like heavy rain dripping on
the roof.
Winter tastes like honey on my hot toast.
Winter smells like steaming hot food on a
cold day.
By Jordan
We are learning to use descriptive language in our writing:
WINTER SENSES POEM
Winter feels like a warm jacket on me tightly.
Winter looks like a girl ice skating on cold ice.
Winter sounds like hot fires crackling in the fireplace.
Winter smells like a hot pie cooking in the oven.
Winter tastes like a little piece of ginger biscuit on a cold day.
By Grace
We are learning to use descriptive language in our writing:
WINTER SENSES POEM
Winter tastes like hot mozzarella pizza melting in my mouth.
Winter tastes like hot tomato soup burning my mouth.
Winter sounds like snowflakes falling onto my beautiful warm house.
Winter looks like snow melting as it falls from
the sky.
By Paige
We are learning to use descriptive language in our writing:
WINTER SENSES POEM
Winter tastes like yummy marshmallows in
my hot drink.
Winter tastes like tasty hot chocolate in my cup.
Winter feels like freezing cold breeze on a
windy day.
Winter looks like a hot freezing snow and
frozen snowmen.
By Matthew
We are learning to use descriptive language in our writing:
WINTER SENSES POEM
Winter tastes like hot chocolate running down my throat.
Winter sounds like squeaky brakes when we stop the car.
Winter looks like a car crashing on the slippery ice.
Winter feels like a hot bath running for me on a cold night.
By Hunter
We are learning to use descriptive language in our writing:
WINTER SENSES POEM
Winter feels like cold wind passing by.
Winter looks like a hot burning fire in my house.
Winter sounds like crackling ice breaking under my feet.
Winter tastes like winter air and toasted marshmallows.
Winter smells like cold frost on the grass.
By Ben
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